new poem!!

I've started to write poems again but i'm not really sure what to call it. i wrote it a couple of days ago..... so this is it :)

upon a building there stood a girl
with eyes red from all the pain 
for no one could remember her name
and no one could save her from all the torture
she took a deep breath and then she jumped
wanting to be free of all the laughter


i actually wrote two poems yesterday but i'm not really sure about this one so hope you like it

a wind blows
through an empty hall
there it stops upon a picture
a picture of pure beauty from the inside
but of plain features on the outside
a picture so bright and so pure
for it could see the beauty
that was within
 

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